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Pale light bled through black leafless trees, touching the thick, white mist snaking through them. Dead grass carpeted the ground, waving slightly in a breeze tainted with the scents of prey. Prey, of course, that would never be caught, much less found.

Lying in the middle of an abandoned clearing was a cat. Black stripes covered his small dark gray body. Deep crimson stained his chest, though there was no wound there.

Suddenly his ice-blue eyes flew open and he took in a heaving gulp of air. He stared with wide eyes at the area surrounding him. W-Where am I? He wondered. He stood on shaky legs and looked around. His hard-muscled body was tense, the fur on his shoulders beginning to spike. He called out into the shadows, his voice strong and clear. "Hello?"

The resounding crack of a long being stepped on alerted him to someone-or something, because who knew what was in this StarClan-forsaken place-sneaking up on him. He spun around, wickedly curved claws glinting and a deadly snarl coming from his jaws.

From the shadows stepped a cat whose name was stained with blood, who brought hidden fear to the surface within the Clans. A cat the young tom had never seen in real life, only seen in dreams. His heart began to pound. "Welcome to the Dark Forest," the cat's high-pitched voice murmured.

The tom swallowed hard. "Father…" he whispered.
I think this is the third time I've tried to start this particular fanfiction... XD But I like this intro the best, so I'm gonna go with it!

Original Characters: (c) Me!
Warriors: (c) Erin Hunter

Intro: Here.
Ch. 1: N/A
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:iconpandasowar:
Pandasowar Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
AMAZING.
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cookehninja Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :iconiloveitmoreplz:
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:iconpandasowar:
Pandasowar Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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:iconomenofthecatfang:
omenofthecatfang Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is Scourge the 'Father'?
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:iconpandasowar:
Pandasowar Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
scourage had a bebe?
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:iconomenofthecatfang:
omenofthecatfang Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No I was asking if he was the 'father' in the story
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:iconpandasowar:
Pandasowar Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Yeah if he was a father then he had a baby. . .
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omenofthecatfang Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If he is the 'Father'
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:iconpandasowar:
Pandasowar Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Yea :o
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omenofthecatfang Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY I love to be right :D
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